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Been a long time since I submitted anything, so heres something I cooked up to get the ol' artistic fingers back in action.
Firstly i have to say that the moral line that you have at the end was kinda out of place and random, possibly you should have just had the flash continuing at the end to the three friends with shocked looks on there faces and then possibly a funny line to finish it off, just seemed a little rushed in the end. The character designs were good and your best feature was the voice acting. Overall a good, solid start to a flash short series.
not cool man
just think of the people that actually died
It was a little funny, but you really didn't finish it. :/
needed a lil more
lol gud moral tho
rocket explosion could have been bter
not very funny....
a little more humor next time
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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