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Nov 26, 2009 | 3:51 PM EST

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This is my first ever animation on newgrounds. I am planning on doing a series with the three characters other than the "unicorn" but I will probably change their voices. EDIT: sorry about the sound and all, I fixed it but now there isn't a preloader because I use toon boom, so just wait a couple seconds for it to start



Rated 5 / 5 stars


Awesome job for your first one. Better than my first one.

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Rated 3 / 5 stars


It sounded like some messed up kids show up until they cut him open which the yelling sounded horrible for, I mean, imagine if you were being cut open, would you be slowly questioning their reasoning AFTER you were cut open then quietly yelling? (I know that last bit sounds contradicting, but I hoped I got my point across). At least your mic quality was good and the idea was good, but just poorly played out. Also, please work on more detail in not only your characters, but the background as well, there wasn't much to look at.
It wasn't that bad for a first flash though, just figure out how to make a preloader too.
Hope this review was helpful for you.

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Unicornbeaver responds:

Wow, thanks for all the pointers, I'll try to make my next one better


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Great job on your first animation on newgrounds, looking forward to your series.

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Rated 2 / 5 stars

No sound

The sound started to play 10 seconds before the end.

Unicornbeaver responds:

sorry, this is my first time uploading i fixed that though