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Submitted: 08/28/2000 | 01:02AM EST

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Current Score: 3.51 / 5.00

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This poem has gotten a lot of overwhelmingly positive and negative feedback since it was posted, 5 or 6 years ago. I wrote this in a difficult time, and lots of people have written me to say that it helped them cope just the same as it helped me.

Anyway, it's a little embarrassing to read it now, but I hope people are still enjoying it.

-03/03/06

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These are my thoughts, and are not meant to offend, if by some chance they do... I should mention that this is a poem, not a sermon. Yes, it is based on my beliefs, and if you did not want to find insight on Newgrounds, perhaps you should not have clicked on the link that read "Enlightenment"..

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It's been several months since I've checked in with this submission, and I was a bit overwhelmed by all the positive response. Thanks to you all, and I'm glad you enjoyed it, though the poem itself is a bit convoluted in the first minute or so.

Music (c) Rob D "Clubbed to Death", Matrix soundtrack.

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Average Score: 6.9 / 10

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Greywolf1234

"Greatness"

date: July 23, 2007

I know much of poetry and philosophy, and you my good sir... well lets just say that we may not be immortal, but words are. Let us leave it at that.

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Rezzillian

"i feel this"

date: September 18, 2006

wow man this is sum very sentimental shit right here. i luv free form poetry i dont write em or speak em i jus listen 2 em wen sum1 sez em.

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Auron-Chan

"Wonderful..."

date: March 3, 2006

All that is said is truth. Did you write that? It's very good. These words have just made my life easier. Thank you.

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Binkybinks

"Thank You!"

date: February 21, 2006

Thank you for this. I hope you make more like this. You are very wise, with ideals that start revolutions for the better.

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diggit

"amazing"

by: diggit
date: August 28, 2005

I know what you speak of, and many who do not react violent towards such things.

I wish i was so good with words, cause I'm not. We each have our skills.
Keep it up.

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