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This is really a small start, to something I would like to continue...
I would really like any constructive criticism you may have
I couldn't find anything relating to a set quality requirement for Flash Submissions so i'm not sure if this meets the mark.
The first thing that stood out for me was the unique character designs you used to play out this scene from 300, very different and it made your short stand out to me. The way you displayed your subtitles were a little annoying and could have been better placed at the bottom of the page. Overall i like how you kept the flash quiet until the sound clip and your humour was pretty decent.
Thank you for the Constructive Criticism, i see what you mean with the subtitles and will keep that in mind. And i realise that it is very short. There are multiple sounds, don't know if you heard them all. And not sure if their was much humour their but thanks for the review!
I gave you a 4 because it was pretty good for your first flash but obviously lacked depth and originality. I liked the art, especially the sword and the background, both are nice, of course they can be improved but for now they will do. The main failing of it was the fact you did 300 i mean its a good movie and all but parodies and stuff have been done to death. Maybe make your own stories or parody something that hasnt been done thousands of times before. Oh yer and i liked the movement of the characters, it seemed really smooth and far more umm i guess natural that alot of submissions. Anyway best of luck in the future.
Thank you for the fair review, much appreciated. I recognise your comment about the originality and will address that in my future animations.
Nice styled graphics, maybe add a replay button and title. Maybe make the scene a bit longer but otherwise it was very good.
I do realise how quick it is and that some of the text may be hard to read, and a replay button and a preloader would probably have been a good idea. Thanks for the review.
It wasn't terrible..
However, the idea is very unoriginal. Also, you could have used some background noise and a replay button instead of a loop.
Thank you for your review, I understand that it's not brilliant and I understand your criticism.
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