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RIGHT MOUSE CLICK TO MEDIUM QUALITY TO AVOIDE LAGGING!!
NOTE THIS IS MY FIRST FLASH SO BE GENTLE!!
The song will soon be availble on the newgrounds audioportal. If your wondering.
But back to the flash. I did some Frame by Frame animation did my best to color it the best way i could :)
And tried to use my original drawing skills! Hope you peeps like it ;)
The problem about the character walking should be resolved now :)
I really liked it =)
Puts you in a good mood, very positive)
Drawings are not very detailed, but bright and colorful)
So, overall, for the first flash - just awesome =)
Thanks mate! Im glad you liked it!
the walking cycles a bit off, but its okay
Yeah i need to work at it more :(
But it should be fixed by now....
for a first try its great!
Thanks alot man! :)
well this being your first is irrelevent
everybody always says "this is my first" but really experience doesn't outway talent, and you did good so you did better than most would in their first attempt, so stop saying "this is my first flash" it's obnoxious. i really like it, and the song was good, the only thing that needed changing was the little black kid in the pink clothing. he was on screen for 100% of the animation, and he wasn't even walking, his legs each did half a walk cycle then went back to the beginning then did the half a walk cycle again. change that and you will have a wonderful flash
Okay i'll see what i can do about it ;)
But i dont remember ever saying "this is my first flash" :P
This is pretty good for your first try, I give you 7/10 for effort.
The walk cycle could have been better, maybe find some reference images of how people really walk for your next go? (It's not easy without it.) The clouds seemed to go by a little bit too fast, as did some of the other background elements, and the colours were a bit bright. I'd highlight those as things to look at in your next animation.
This is still really good for a first try though, I look forward to seeing what you do next.
Yup thanks for the pointers! I'll do my best on that! ;)
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