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RIGHT MOUSE CLICK TO MEDIUM QUALITY TO AVOIDE LAGGING!!
NOTE THIS IS MY FIRST FLASH SO BE GENTLE!!
The song will soon be availble on the newgrounds audioportal. If your wondering.
But back to the flash. I did some Frame by Frame animation did my best to color it the best way i could :)
And tried to use my original drawing skills! Hope you peeps like it ;)
The problem about the character walking should be resolved now :)
I could kill you with that sun. But i wont, because you made cute bunnies and candy mountains on your walk, which ended kinda short if you ask sir Qalter Penbrough of Aserkista, Where ever that is. :S
LOL well im glad you liked it ;) I'll try and make even better animations in the future.
The Flash was basic, but the music was good
I understand that it was ur first...so don't be angry that i say that there is alot of room for improvement.
the music was good, but on that note, as a song even...it was pretty basic. Not much was going on in the song, and i think you did that on purpose. A basic song so you don't have to make an over the top flash.
I want more. I listen to ur music every time you upload so i know how animated your music can be, and on that token, i want a flash to match.
Definitely on your next flash make a more in depth track...and have stuff going on that matches the music, like in tune with the music. Kudos for making a flash, cuz god knows i haven't! But my expectation is very high for the quality of the flash, because i know the quality of your music.
I hope to hear and see more of your art soon! :3
You hit it right on the nail! I was going for a very simple song for a very simple enimation!
I will however try to meet your expectation ;)
Thanks for the review!
The light tone, colorful art style, and GREAT music came together to make this awesome flash. I hope there is more to come.
thank you for the wonderfull review and yes! There is more to come!
kinda made my brin squish with repeditivness, but good work.
All part of the plan baby.
The song was pretty decent. Not fantastic, and a little repetitive. But I liked the general style. I'd give you 7/10 for that
The flash animation wasn't great. I think you have a lot to learn about art yet. I'd say 4/10 for that
Overall, it's a bit more than the sum of its parts, so I give you 7/10 rather than an average. My overall opinion is "Pretty decent" but keep trying and do more.
Thanks for the detaild review. But in all honesty i liked the art alot. You should check out few of my Art submissions!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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