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I have to admit this took me a while to finish for a a pretty short
flash. But hey, it's my first. I'll let you be the judge of how good it is and next
time i promise to make it smooth.
it was very smooth and well put together keep up the good work
Not bad... not bad at all!
For your first Flash, this is really quite good. There's plenty of room for polish, though.
Your graphics could use some touching up, although they're still decent for an animation of this caliber.
As for the animation, it's mostly okay, with a couple of small errors. For example, the part at the end when the main character grabs the helicopter blade contains a fairly abrupt motion. You'd probably have to watch the movie again and look closely to see what I mean.
As you mentioned, the motions aren't very smooth. But they aren't terribly choppy, either. Regardless, it would be nice to see the action happening at a higher frame rate.
The camera effects are VERY nice. I especially like the way it pans and zoomscontinously, even if the motion is slow. It gives the movie more energy; great job with that.
You did a nice job with the sound effects; most of them are synced up pretty well with the action. Plus, none of them drag on longer than they need to.
The background music fits well with the animation; good choice on your part. However, you may want to consider curtailing it a bit. After the replay button appears, the music continues to play. If you had instead edited the music such that it cuts off, or better yet, fades out at the end of the movie, you'd have a significantly smaller file size. You can use Audacity - a free sound editor - to do that. If you're interested, check out this link: http://audacity.sourceforge.net/
As a whole, this is decent, albeit short. The ending caught me by surprise, and it would have been nice if you'd continued the animation to show where the main character ends up after flying off.
And I hope you keep on animating! You're off to a great start!
for a beginner okay!
pretty good actually for your first submission liked the scene where he climbed in the roster.
keep it up but next time try to get a better song we all know this one
and the last scene where he takes the wings of the helicopter thats not good better if he just knocked out the guy in it and then just get in the helicopter
so next time think of that ;)
umm... the guns were not silenced, becouse there were no silencer on them and silenced guns dont have gunfire, but they had silenced sounds! the other parts were good :)
Ok for a beginner.
This is nice. The animation is close to being smooth, you can discern the protagonist from the antagonists, and the whole thing seems to be drawn with some semblance of talent. However the music sucks and guns don't look like that .
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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