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This is a simple Flash Animation I made. Just a short movie of some Figures fighting. By the way this is the first Animation I ever made. I hope you like it. :D
Not bad, not bad!
Good animation for newbie :]
Decent... not bad for your first!
Stick fights are kind of overdone, but this is still okay.
Some of the animation is a bit awkward. The walk cycle in the very beginning is rather choppy, and the sticks' idle animations are a little too jittery, in my opinion. You put some nice frame-by-frame work into this movie, though. There isn't much choppiness in the fighting scenes; good job with that!
The sound effects are good, but some of them drag on for too long, and don't sync up nicely with the animation as a result. You might want to try using a sound editing program to deal with that issue. Audacity works well, and it's pretty easy to use. It's also free. ;)
You can download the software here, if interested: http://audacity.sourceforge.net/
Another issue I have with this is the text. Some of it appears and disappears way too fast to be read, which is pretty annoying. You might want to consider that while testing your movies in Flash.
All in all, this could definitely use some polishing, but it's a great start. Keep working at it and you'll improve for sure! :)
you've tried using fbf but haven't drawn it very acuratly
but stil pretty good
I liked it =D
Great job drawing c hould use some work though =) '
i really enjoy it!!! love the music! animation was perfect!
things to improve:
- more enemies
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