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A flash music video and a tribute to the song "Lacrymosa" by Evanescence.
As always, enjoy!
need more on stuff
seems like you understand flash well, but, a lot of the issues reside in your animation. Eyelashes aren't that bushy, and mouths are little holes. i think if the mouth looked like it was opening--dont be afraid to draw inside the head--more obviously, it'd be more dramatic. which, is probably what you'd like given it's a music video. also, with the chains on the girls neck, try to use reference. it wouldn't be stiff, so draw a layer of a limp line, or if it's him jerking the girl around, just make a straight line. then, on another layer draw the chains, so it's not so jumpy. Good luck on your next project. and feel free to ask me for advice. :)
OMG Awesome video
and this girl is so beautiful..! Noooooo! Don't kill her.. argh!
Sure its an ok video but i dont get all the other reviews they are saying its good exept the animation?
What els is there besides the animation if you ask me all there is is the music and thats just ok bt other ppl can say difrent about that but the animation was not that good so i dont know why your rating it so high
I like it. need to work on ur animation like the guy b4 me said. good parts : fighting scenes, and how the horse looks when galloping. beginning - middle eyes a little bushy i think. work on ur background. girl looks best around the beginning. overall u still need 2 work on it 9*
P.S. like the story :)
work on your animation
i give it an 4/5 stars because of animation an 8/10 for the same.
but nothing else matters
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