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Nov 20, 2009 | 6:45 AM EST

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A flash music video and a tribute to the song "Lacrymosa" by Evanescence.

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Reviews


SoldierdarkopsSoldierdarkops

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 24, 2010

yeah

Story is nice and well set but could use a ton of work in the art. Take your time with it and work at it like its art not just a story. Sorry but it looks like you rushed through it.



rageianrageian

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 15, 2010

yeah...keep practicing :)

forgive me but that sucked :(

you pushed your talent beyond its limit that never ends well :/ well ill give you a 4 for effort keep practicing and you definitely get better :)

sometime in the future id like to see a remake of this :)

~rage


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KumuffinKumuffin

Rated 2 / 5 stars May 4, 2010

I'm sorry but I didn't like it

Im sorry but I draw better than that every day. Please work on your drawings and animations.



FishStalkerFishStalker

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 24, 2010

I didn't like it...

The story was good but sometimes I didn't even unserstand what u meant!
The sound quality was bad too, so are the drawings!!
I don't like to give bad critique, but your drawings ( I mean the persons ) look like a kid draws on paint!

5/10; 2/5


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HunteruidHunteruid

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 7, 2010

Happy endings are not compulsory!!

Story 5/5
Animation 2/5
Art 2/5

Just a reminder to all whom are commenting, that "Happy" isn't exactly something that HAS to be applied to every single story out there, some things are perfectly fine being depressing, or having sad endings, doesn't stop them from being beautiful.
The story was well-done, you also picked a good tune to go with it, however, you have room for improvement as far as animation and drawing is concerned.
Practice, you can only get better.