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Been way to long since I put something up here! So happy to be back ^-^
This was just a little project that came together in a couple days.
was going to have a replay button but not familar with actionscript 3 yet.
but enough said, enjoy!
Love it! this is totally true... love the perverted shrink "Mmmhmm, Mmmhmm". you should think about using him as a character in future animations=)
haha thank you! and perhaps I will. I have alot in the works atm but you never know lol
Nothing too new, but fun.
I think I'll start with what I liked and work my way down.
The Animation - I really enjoy your style, and the motion, while all pretty simple, was good.
The Script - It's a little dull and cliché, but gets the job done well enough. The way the shrink reacted when his patient saw the drawing was great!
The Music - While the music didn't overpower the flash, it didn't feel quite right. This may just be my preference, but the music just didn't seem to fit the setting.
The Voice Acting - Well, both of the voices were clear and the sound quality wasn't bad, but the actual acting was lacking. The Shrink was too dull, and sounded like you just used a pitch change to make him sound older. I understand he isn't suppose to be really engaged in the conversation, but he comes off too flat. The patient was better, but still seemed to lack any real degree of emotion. He just sort of hovered around one vocal area the entire time.
Overall, I think you have some good stuff here; it just needs refinement. Keep it up!
point noted thanks for the feedback. the whole animation was put together in 2 days so i knew it would be lacking in some areas. when i recorded the voices i was acually on my laptop on a headset trying not to wake up my daughter in the same room so i can understand if i couldnt get the emotion they way i really wanted and could do. But yes thank you again I'll keep everything in mind and have a couple more on the way that I hope you will enjoy ^-^
It was pretty funny in the beggining...
But the end wasn't really that funny.
lol ty anyway :)
It started promising but the ending didn't make me laugh. I liked how you draw the characters and background. The voice acting is perfect. Music is a bit louder than voices, but it wasn't hard to hear the characters.
All in all it is a nicely drawn cartoon but not as funny as I expected it to be.
P.S. Which tool do you use to draw the characters?
lol yea didnt expect it to be funny for everyone but ty for being honest, and i used the paint brush to draw them. thanks again :)
Nice short animation with a good punchline, although the timing and delivery was a bit slow - it kind of drags on a bit in places, it could easily be fixed with a few more angles, actually showing his family when he talks about them or quicker voice acting but i look forward to seeing more stuff from you :D
Thanks! and yea was thinking about putting in the family but didnt given my time frame, and as far has the Docs slow voice was just trying to get the point across of how slow some tend to talk. thanks for the pointers I'll keep it in mind. ^-^
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