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A message from me to you. An N.G.S.A. (Newgrounds service anouncement)
Add some motherfucking sound.
Well. Don't see you submiting anything.
Bah, cool for a begin...
With sound, It would be better.
why is a guy just standing on what looks like a freeway...?
but yeah, sound would be nice. but animation was pretty good.
it's really not that bad! but im sure you werent expecting a 10 out of 10? Have the NG Preloader page have a nice custom image, and make this a bit longer, with more information, and I'll give it a 7/10.
Could be more.
What kills it for me is that there is no sound. Even a simple background song would help alot. Sound effects would def make it better.
You could also lengthen it. Add a bit of a story.
I appreciate the feedback. I'll submit a second edition with sound and and a story.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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