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Missing Heart Short Story

rated 3.93 / 5 stars
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Nov 17, 2009 | 9:58 PM EST

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EDIT: WOW! Lol Now I'm on the featured part of the front page I'm so happy!! Thank you so much you guys! ^____^
EDIT: REALLY!?? OMG Another reward and its the daily second place!! That means a lot to me!!!!

Something I should add: This isnt supposed to be takin literally, in other words, this story has a moral, a girl was inlove and her heart was stolen she felt so torn apart and then a man came along and healed her wounds. :]
Thats how I see it lol.

<33333333 Thank you!

This was something I made for class, a short story where a girl lost her heart... literally and a man has an extra or found it however you see it and decides to give it to her restoring her skin color and clothing and mainly healing her ^^

I thought the idea was cute its a little scary though lol...

I finally make a play button, you have to click the blood around the words play though.. I guess I didnt get it perfect yet xD

I dont have much to say about this, its not the best.. Im still new to flash. : P

Not sure what happened but the bottum and top are supposed to be not visible and they are I dont know what happened.

BLEH i dont know : /

Still no loading bar.

Sorry forgot to add the song title and such:

Song: I Will Follow You Into The Dark

By: Death Cab For Cutie

Also--- I am going to most likely reply to everyone's reviews.. 'tis fun : D



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


it was nicely done
kinda made me think of kingdom hearts, what with the no heart and all

Syringes responds:

I think that did inspire me a little to be honest : D


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

very good,

though a little TOO emo for me... but I would be a dick to vote it down for that.
Good use of the blur filters but it was maybe a BIT overdone, it seems like it could use to be scaled back a little but it definitely helped create a sense of perspective. I liked that pan across the sidewalk with the telephone poles too, for a flash beginner you definitely got that one right.
And good FBF animation as well, great to see that you didnt seem to rely on any tweening for the actual characters.
Overall really nice. the only real technical flaw i saw was that the song doesnt cut off when it returns to the preloader, you should maybe find a way to fix that.
or not, and just worry about it on your next project. hah.


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Syringes responds:

Thanks so much for your help! ^^

Yea I will work on the filters I tend to over use D:

Lol unfortunately the music matched on my teachers slow computer and then I noticed it doesnt cause my computer is fast and it changed the speed completely next time Ill look into that xP


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

very creative

i liked the story and love the song!!!
Go Death Cab!!!!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

pretty cute

Love the plot for this short. Keep it up~

Syringes responds:

Thanks, I sure will : D


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Short but sweet

I'll admit, I thought she was a zombie because of the no heart thing, but it actually was a bit heartwarming. Animation was pretty good, but the backgrounds could use a little work though. This made my day.

Syringes responds:

Lol yea well she is kind of undead makes sense ^^
Thanks for your review. <33