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Missing Heart Short Story

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Nov 17, 2009 | 9:58 PM EST

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EDIT: WOW! Lol Now I'm on the featured part of the front page I'm so happy!! Thank you so much you guys! ^____^
EDIT: REALLY!?? OMG Another reward and its the daily second place!! That means a lot to me!!!!

Something I should add: This isnt supposed to be takin literally, in other words, this story has a moral, a girl was inlove and her heart was stolen she felt so torn apart and then a man came along and healed her wounds. :]
Thats how I see it lol.

<33333333 Thank you!

This was something I made for class, a short story where a girl lost her heart... literally and a man has an extra or found it however you see it and decides to give it to her restoring her skin color and clothing and mainly healing her ^^

I thought the idea was cute its a little scary though lol...

I finally make a play button, you have to click the blood around the words play though.. I guess I didnt get it perfect yet xD

I dont have much to say about this, its not the best.. Im still new to flash. : P

Not sure what happened but the bottum and top are supposed to be not visible and they are I dont know what happened.

BLEH i dont know : /

Still no loading bar.

Sorry forgot to add the song title and such:

Song: I Will Follow You Into The Dark

By: Death Cab For Cutie

Also--- I am going to most likely reply to everyone's reviews.. 'tis fun : D



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

sweet &amp; sick

This was sweet in some kind of sick way quite cute too and the song just made it, I'm really sorry I gave this a nine out of ten but it was a little bit short and the drawings weren't all that.

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Syringes responds:

Its ok dont give me a ten if you dont think it deserves one hehe, besides I like 9's tooo : DD

Lawl and thanks for your review ^^


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good job!

It was just a few steps away from Tim Burton-esque-ly creepy. Embrace that. Also, Death Cab may not have been the best choice for the music, but I give you points because Ben Gibbard is amazing.

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Syringes responds:

Thanks! Yea I wanted a song with acoustic that was somewhat cute and that was the only one i knew that was good, If I find a better one I may even change it aye ^^


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great animation!

I think the song's a little cliche, but maybe that's because i've heard it before somewhere... the animation is nice, the art is better, plus she looks really cute in that last scene. Nice simple story, love the way she transitions from a grey, dead shape into a joyous, happy girl. the way she tackles him is amusing too. Nice work! hope to see more of it someday.

Syringes responds:

Hehe glad you noticed the change, I wish I could ake my backgrounds look as good as my characters @_@


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very good!

Congratulations! A very good animation, but short one... I liked the style, and a good music choice. But, a advice... You have talent, just work more on the graphic and it will be better. I liked your work, girl ~
Keep working and perfecting ^ ^

Oh... And I would love to see a full video of this music, try something like this! ^ ^

- Zero

== P.S. - By the way, for who doesn't know... The music is "I Will Follow You Into The Dark" of the "Death Cab For Cutie" ==

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Syringes responds:

Hehe thank you, I will definitely make longer animations I guess I hurried on this mainly near the end, but it is an amazing song, possible I may add to this animation to make it better. : P


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

only one thing

its too short. (in return, the review is short)

Syringes responds:

Lol I guess that makes sense : D