Animation: Mottis inspired animation I see, what was up with the blue M&M character standing there? Also the chair fell over, nice job Smoke. lol

Storyline: Apparently Smoke was sleeping and he was suddenly woke up and furious and started to cuss out the blue M&M for waking him up and then falls out of the chair while Snowball picks up his shades and examines them.

Audio: Tourettes guy and Ren and Stimpy, pretty silly mix there that was.

Overall: Very nice piece of work, might want to start making your own characters up though so it looks a lot better.

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I think that the "Tourettes Guy" is not the best placet hat you can draw inspiration from in order to produce flash movies. Full credit to you for using Mottis' Bunnykill in order to get a decent looking piece of animation, but I need to see more of your own style to really score it up here.

I think that you've done a decent job, but there needs to be more plot exposition, before the Tourettes starts - they do other things than just swear - they have twitches and all sorts of other nuances, that you could have researched and scripted into it, so that's something you can use to get further ahead.

Obviously, if you're going to use Bunnykill, you could have had some violence, as opposed to the sound effects offscreen and then the aftermath, for example when Smoke fell off the chair.

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First off, I feel bad for the Tourettes Guy, may he rest in peace.

As for this, totally hilarious. I think the funniest part of this animation is the fact that in Mottis's Bunnykill animations, the characters never actually talk except in speech balloons, but here, you have Smoke going all angst totally out of the blue, something none of us expected at all. And the ending was totally comical with Smoke stumbling out of the chair with Snowball just watching the whole spectacle.

If anything, I would have maybe detailed the surroundings and backgrounds a bit more. They were definitely good, but a bit plain looking. Also, it did feel a little short, but it was good nonetheless, I loved the way it ended and I wouldn't have changed a thing about that. It was original and it had great comedy, and that combination will help you score big on Newgrounds.

Make more of these, they're priceless. And by the way, Snowball looks great wearing Smoke's shades.

lol it was freaking hilarious good job

im sorry but this just made me laugh my ass off thanks i needed to laugh