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HoopzShort #1 - Jeff

rated 1.25 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Nov 14, 2009 | 7:23 PM EST

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A short about Jeff from the Shitscape series.

This is not the same as my other flash movies cause its actually funny so you will like it and not review it saying stuff like "u r gay". To correct you i am not gay so stop saying that im just different then the acvergae guy cause i like that.

Enjoy the movie and don't take it seriously.

I dont remember the name of the music that plays when Jeff is face is zooming into the screen so dont ask.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

first REAL flash?

Here's some constructive criticism.
1. Try to make the character actually walk.
2. Head disappear as ending? At least put in a "replay?" button so we know it actually ended.
3. Too short. Please make it longer with more (and better) jokes.
Now some good things that made a 4/10:
1. character looks okay.
2. background looks fine.
3. It's not a spam or a "I hate you" message.

Hope users actually looks at it before voting.

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thehoopz responds:

i hate you