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Ok so this is my first animation so dont be rude :D
Toke 1 day to make.
And i dont know why audio sounds so weird O.O
You can definitely improve...
...which is something I mean in a good way. With some more time spent on the background elements, and with the audio fixed somehow, this can become pretty decent. Congrats on your first flash submission and keep at it.
I didnt hate the animation itself, for a first time and done in a day, it was fairly decent.
However, i just cant be hatin' anyone who use's the offspring for a soundtrack ^_^ Nice job mate.
i will grade it like gubthebub....
+3 for sound
+2 for animation(coz.using color and stickfigure as starter of your career)
+1 for beginner's spirit
-1 for Motion movement
-2 for unclear story
and that gives you...........3 points + 3 points for hard work= 6 points!!
keep up the gud work~ ^-^v
I gave you a 8/10 and 5/5 since you said it was your first flash. Pretty good. That would have taken me a month (jk).
+2 for sound
+1 for animation
+2 for good first impression of your flash on newgrounds.
-1 for shortness
-1 for the concentration needed for this flash (kinda hard to follow)
8 in all. Good score.
Good job. I look forward to seeing more of your work here on newgrounds.
Your fellow Newgrounder,
Gub Da' Bub
OK, but hey! Its your first time!
I have to say Its OK its not great...
but Its your first time anyways!
The thing I think that you should improve on is... please work more that ONE day please!
Have you seen OTHER flashes? They take up to months!
An old storyteller enters a city with nothing but the stories he wishes to pass on...
Reaper uses his ultimate as it should be.
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
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