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Yeah this is my second ultimate flash submission. Hope you like it!
Sorry, there were some minor faults which I didn't realize, all fixed now :D
maybe you should use the thing I call "color tweens"
Not bad, but could do better
Right, from the start of this piece, I think that you almost hit it, but there were a couple of issues, namely that the introduction 'fell off' the side of the screen, making it look like 'welcom' in the first few frames.
I think that it's a decent start and perhaps you can progress on towards more advanced pieces now, combining two or more colours in each shot, when they do things that make images that are distinctly multi-coloured. I would recommend that you zoom in and use a smaller tool, so that you get more control over the images that you're making.
I'd have suggested more 'firework' style imagery, where a sphere of light heads into the middle of the screen and explodes, with the sparkles getting gradually smaller and fading out as they burn out. Perhaps this could be some sort of explosion, representing more pictures, with the points of light exploding to become lines of images painted on the black background.
Well, that should give you some good inspiration and direction to do your great pieces of music justice with!
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damn it, it is because you have forced size.
Needs some work
Dont get me wrong this was really nice flash.
But you need some work on the improving your flash, like going above what you have now. I can see that you have skills if you keep working at it. Nice songs your have chosen.
That must be atleast 30 fps!!!!!!!!!!
Squiggles that Entertain.
It's strange but I actually liked this submission. Some of the patterns the squiggles (albeit lights) made some pretty interesting and cool patterns but others were not all too original. The music fits the franticness well and it was a decent enough length to be enjoyable. I was a little annoyed with the opening credits, particularly because your name and other words were cut off slightly by the screen. In the end this is enjoyable and is moreso a hyper-active screensaver, but that's a good thing.
Yeah should be fixed now :D
A short film about a park bench
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