You are the lucky one!
worthy work, even if this was your first animation it's perfect.
show us your 2nd animation so that we can rate you accordingly.
Keep up your good work!
Author Comments
In this animation I used a sound track which is an original records bought from the store. If I am not permitted to use this sound track then I will remove it from NG permanently. This piece of work is justta trial.
The good news is that, I will be joining the Picasso Animation College (In partnership with Centennial College, Toronto, Canada) from November 16, 2009 and I will show you my work!
Tongphei responds:
Sure :) thanks
It's not terrible but...
This still could use a lot of work. Just some tips:
- it's always a good idea to credit the audio, otherwise you're plagiarizing someone else's work and that's NO GOOD.
- this is a common rule of thumb: NEVER submit a first attempt at flash unless it is phenomenally good.
- this really doesn't look like it was made in flash at all. The animation's too grainy and looks imported or whatnot.
Anyways, I leave improvements up to you, I think you have a better idea than anyone else on what you need to work on.
Tongphei responds:
from next time, I will use my own sound clip. this short movie was animated in the year 2002 and uploaded on youtube. when I came to know about this great website NG, I was interested to share my work round the globe. So, I downloaded this from my youtube account http://www.youtube.com/user/nishikant a and made some changes using Windows movie maker.
I will try my best level in the upcoming movie, "The Taste of Blood".
Thanks for your suggestion and reviews.
Great,For a first submission.
I enjoyed it but it was a bit laggyish,You seem to have put in a reasonable effort into this,But you need to work on this a bit more,I hope to see this come out of under judgement.
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Ratings
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Audio:7/10(It suits a fighting theeme,And it was enjoyable but it sounded a bit dull.)
Audio quality:9/10(It seemed to have fizzed up a bit,Near the end,You could improve on making it a bit clearer.)
Flash:6/10(You get some sympathy since this is your first,You should improve.)
Flash quality:2/10(I saw it but it was very fizzy and it lagged a bit.)
Altogether,I liked it,But there was alot of room for improvement,I hope I see some more improved flash from you.
P.S:Give credit to the artist you got this song from,Add their band name,And link it in this at the file animation.
Tongphei responds:
Sure, I'll give full credit to the band :)
I will try my best to improve the quality from the next movie.
Thanks!
You need to use more frames!!!
Remember rome was not built in one day
you need to take more time animating and making the people actualy walk if you have msn i culd help you out =D
Tongphei responds:
I have msn account but my weakness is to do work all alone, even if it is hard for me to do.
We know teacher is needed in learning but for me I would like to go through some online training.
However, If I need any help I will surely contact you.
Thanks!
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