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THIS IS MADE OF APPLES AND I LOVE IT AND I THINK I'M IN LOVE.
Cool things on the movie:
1- I like the fighting +4
2- VERY cool moves +4
3- Cool sounds +2
Bad things on the movie:
1- In progress XD -1
2- Most of the work is like made in paint... -1
This movie is really cool! Overall... 8/10
You got really cool dynamic camera motion, but when the clone troopers first came in, it got a little too shaky, making it difficult to follow. Moreover, you're limiting your visual potential by keeping it at that terminal side-scroller view.
Think about it...by keeping it in that same 2D perspective, you have almost no diversity in-between shots. It would be much more exciting if you mixed it up.
You're also limiting your visual potential by keeping them as sticks. In my eyes, that's very lazy and unoriginal. Dish out simple character designs, and make them more...lively. This flash demonstrates you have the ABILITY to animate, so if you're going to do it, do it right. :D
The voice acting kinda came out of left field when they/he first spoke on the speeders...it was almost too clarifiable considering they're going 50-90 mph on those things, but I digress. If you had set something up before the fight, allowing the audience to follow how these characters fell into conflict, that would be tight, and it would prepare us for dialogue later...but in all honesty, that final line "May the force be with you" seemed so snobby, it kinda disgusted me.
The special effects will probably reflect high scores among other users...as they should, because they looked great! Being a Star Wars nerd myself, though, I'm having difficulty understanding a blue/silver/red AT-AT in the same shot as a Clone War era drop-ship...again, though, I digress. :P
I gave it a 3. Keep up the good work!
HBO starts targeting children!
What place? Earth!
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