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SuperSmashBrosBrawl PART6 WARNING A LOAD, A SHITLOAD OF VIOLENCE
Erm, it's not great, but it's not a zero either.
I mean, it's pretty clear that some effort was putting into it. I'll admit it's not stunning or anything, but zeros are meant for trolls, 10-second stick figure crap, and the like.
To the author, I would suggest learning how to operate basic flash and ultimately create it within the program. Substance is often lost in the process of transferring from one format to another. As the dude below me stated, voice-acting/voices in general would be a step in the right direction. The humor was also severely lacking; the attempted "jokes" were obvious and not laugh-inducing. The movement of the characters is also very limited and often breaks flow. Overall, it isn't the worst, but there is definitely a LOT of work to be done here.
Mario hates me! Make me feel good!
Ehmm, the other reviews have been pretty unfair.
Really? A 0?
The movie isn't amazing, but the animation most definetly has its potential.
The comedy really just wasn't there in some parts though, and voices would be a huge step on the right direction.
Work on adding more frames to the film to smooth out animations, and I think the film was made outside flash and converted so I'd work on that too.
BLACK MAGIC BLACK SCREAN BAD GRAFIX
this movie was not funny.... i honestly felt like i waisted my time. the animation needs some work and you really need to work on this. it could be funny as hell but it needs a lot of work.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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