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Nov 8, 2009 | 12:07 PM EST
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Jai takes in the young elf blane and he begins to reveal his tragic past. What happened to this boy that would make him wander the forest all alone?
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Notes-
-If you haven't seen episode 2 please watch it before this one.
-My computer had a terrible time handling this animation I had to sacrifice some things mainly music
-So I don't think i'll be making an episode this length or longer for quite some time.
-The episode alone is about 5 minutes. with the Into and outro it's over 7minutes. Enjoy
EDIT: I fixed some of the sound effects so the voices are clearer

Reviews


PIED3PIED3

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome!

How has this not got over a 4.00? Its great! Seriously, i mean good voice acting, good animation, interesting story, good art. What don't people like? Can't wait for the next episode and keep it up!


CartoonCoffee responds:

Lol I'm not to sure myself. Thanks for the review


henke37henke37

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Mixing issues

The sound levels where uneven, some voices where hard to hear. Other than that, marvelous work, I am hoping to see more of this.


CartoonCoffee responds:

I tried fixing the sounds. And you definitely will see more


M-80eaterM-80eater

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

it was ok

i thought the intro was kind of over done so i dont particularly like it that much



mixe123mixe123

Rated 4 / 5 stars

made me want more :)

the only real proble i had with this is that the ambiant sounds are to loud for the chars voice, aprt from that it was quite enjoyible and i would like to see more ^^


CartoonCoffee responds:

Yea I agree I tried fixing it but I'm not sure if I did a good enough job. Thanks for the review


JazLyteJazLyte

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Still loving this series

Great presentation, not a lot of people go through the trouble of making an original intro/outro. Love the Akire and Jai, thankyou for having ADULT main characters...So sick of a bunch of schoolkids fighting evil and puberty. There's also some damn good voice acting here, they sound natural, which many people don't seem to get the concept of.
Still has the same issues as last time though, this "episode" still doesn't really accomplish anything story-wise. I mean it doesn't add more questions which is good, but it doesn't answer any questions either which is bad. Since you kept in line with the whole anime-style "limited animation" thing you're gonna have to hustle with the storytelling and find a way to add more rewatch value to your stuff. Still lookin forward to more tho! =)


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CartoonCoffee responds:

Thanks! I agree, the story is moving a bit slow but I'm doing this so the viewers can get a good feel of the characters first. It starts to pick up a bit more in the next episode but maybe not enough for your taste. But it will get there so just hold tight =)