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keep on pratiseing u will get it. tips needs sound..... hey i started when i was 14. now i am 18 i still has not up loaded any that suceed. (keep in mind i only up loaded one).

No love

Sorry I don't think first flash is an excuse. I didn't summit my forst flash because I new it was bad. So you get this one, and I voted 0 because I don't believe in shows newgrounds you practie flashes.

errmmmm

its alright i guess.....would of been so much better if their was some background music and jumping sounds

Wow, nice!

For a first, its pretty good! A 3/10 stars for effort, and 3/10 stars because it was pretty funny.

Minor problems:

Could have sound
Could have the same sprites
and could have a little better quality

remeber, there is some room for improvement! (not to be rude)

add some sound effects

and it should be a lot better and funnier