Score: 10
"I know this from somewhere, don't I? :P"
date: November 21, 2009
Have in mind that if this hadn't been on newgrounds, I would have given you a 7 or so.
....
It was good, better than what I expected it to be.
As deux said, progress is easy to see here.
Nevertheless, it could have been A LOT better.
º I didn't like the way you mixed styles (sprites & Drawings).
It's not a bad idea, not a bad idea at all... but it wasn't well put in.
The way you change from sprites to drawings has to be more... gentle and swift.
Show an sprite one moment, zoom out, and then show a drawing really is a bad idea.
º Snow's monologue was weak and dull. There wasn't anything "catchy" about it.
Also, it should have been more of "tearJerker" moment.
ºLast but not least, the fighting-scenes lacked of... something.
I don't know what, I'm not an animation-expert or anything, but they weren't as interesting as previous fighting-scenes.
Having said that, is good to know you are still on the business of making Flash Movies, and hope you keep this up.
Say hi to the forum on my behave. ;)
Salu2's