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Listen, This is only my second "real" movie so i'm kindda an amature. plz don't be to harsh with you're reviews.
First of all let me say, this movie is NOT for everyone.... not everyone would like it and some may say its pointless. I don't think it is but... so be it.
Just Fyi, I didn't "envent" the plot, it's a knowen folk mith or something about a woman-deamon that lures ppl into her house and kills them. I just made it into a flsh with a music.
Don't watch if you find blood disguadting
THREES AND BEERS ALL AROUND!
were you drunk when you made this? what's the point? she just lures guys to her house and slaughters em'? I wouldn't say that this is the worst thing I have seen because there alotta other bad things out there... it was good for what it was... (whatever that was)... Tamara was a little dissipointing. shoulda had a shot gun or a butterfly gun (AKA magnum) when you kill someone make it lively! you know you want good reviews, now cause I watched this I need a beer.
As a second work, it is understandable that you're still working on technique, so the lackluster animation style was acceptable. However, I found this to be nothing more than yet another "Insane Murderess" tale, simply death for the sake of death. There was nothing to keep me engaged, and the song didn't manipulate my emotions to feel anything for these characters. The gimick with the breath was nicely animated, but uncreative. Plus, the whole thing was too short. Work on developing a plot and characters, and the animation will come in time. Good luck on your next piece.
... And we still don't know why she kills. (It would be nice if we found out while watching this short. Otherwise, what's the point of watching it?!)
That really didn't have much to it. It was way too short, had inaccuracies in the killings and covering of them up.( The forehead, com'n), Graphics sucked, the pile of bodies in a pool of blood....? Yeah that's gonna not stink and draw attention. Also the whole stink of breath thing kinda was lame. Not very good all the way around. Go on to something else man or improve drastically.
Good story, but questions come to mind.
A beautiful thing may actually be very sinister. This film seems to portray this message.
The story is good and the graphics is good especially for a second film.
Plus, since the story goes one somewhat slowly, the viewer wonders what will happen next, creating a somewhat suspenseful feel. The end was kinda creepy.
This film may be confusing for someone who does not know what this film is based on.
A short film about a park bench
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