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Listen, This is only my second "real" movie so i'm kindda an amature. plz don't be to harsh with you're reviews.
First of all let me say, this movie is NOT for everyone.... not everyone would like it and some may say its pointless. I don't think it is but... so be it.
Just Fyi, I didn't "envent" the plot, it's a knowen folk mith or something about a woman-deamon that lures ppl into her house and kills them. I just made it into a flsh with a music.
Don't watch if you find blood disguadting
I didn't like it, but I thought you made the story, which I thought was good. So I would give you credit for that. And then, I read your author comments, and laughed, finding that you didn't make the story. To be blunt, the graphics were horrible. That being said, I can't draw worth crap either. Anyway, nice try.
If its 2 harsh sry...
If this review is 2 harsh sry...DONT B A GOTH!!! all these movies about random people pointlessly killing (some exceptions made) are not entertaining. Make comedies. Not tragedies, its not what i want even in the "serious shorts" sections. Good art 4 a 2nd movie tho
Its a start
not bad for an amateur. :) and cool music, it went great with it.
Well as it's your first and you asked me not to be harsh I won't your working off an interesting concept. however you got the Myth wrong. the woman who lures men to their doom is a succubus and she drains their life force whilst 'doing the deed' thats how she kills them. Your interpretation was interesting but still slightly lacking I couldn't quit put my finger on it but 'somethign apeared to be wrong or missing. Good Luck with future submissions.
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