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Listen, This is only my second "real" movie so i'm kindda an amature. plz don't be to harsh with you're reviews.
First of all let me say, this movie is NOT for everyone.... not everyone would like it and some may say its pointless. I don't think it is but... so be it.
Just Fyi, I didn't "envent" the plot, it's a knowen folk mith or something about a woman-deamon that lures ppl into her house and kills them. I just made it into a flsh with a music.
Don't watch if you find blood disguadting
The graphics were not the best, but it had an interesting story.
Last guy said it all!
Jesus, this was awful! It just sucked...everything about it...Okay, okay this isn't constructive critisism, but I can't think how to improve on it. The last reviewer pretty much said it all:
Funniest flash I've seen in a while. To those that don't get it, let me make a summary of the story:
A girl is sitting in her couch, when she lets out a yawn, the breath she lets out smells so bad that it is spread outside. Some guy is walking around a mile away, when he smells the lady's breath and runs to her house to give her a breath mint. He can't find her, but then out of nowhere she appears behind him and stabs his neck, which causes him to bleed...ketchup! She then throws him in a basement filled with skeleton decorations for halloween! There his almost dead body breathes in her breath once more while she is walking by, this instantly kills and decays his body, which causes it to change into a skeleton in less then 3 seconds. Ta-da!
Seriously, that was a very funny flash. Bad graphics and a humorous story, congratulations on amusing me. :D
ok i guess
well first of all what sort of dumbass would walk into a house cuz it smells good?! i didnt really think the graphcis were great either. i liked the music and how it went with the theme. a little to much blood in my opinion...thats about it
Pretty good for a 2nd short
Thumbs up and hats off to you. This was a good short for an amature. I love the background music, it gives the short a vampiric and alluring feel. Keep working and you'll be even better !!!! I've heard about this myth too, so I get it. The movie, "Hocus Pocus" also had a similar idea. The woman would sing and all the town children would come. She'd suck the life out of them. Well... I've babbled enough. Good Luck!!!
A short film about a park bench
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