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Eulogy For 'DeDeDes Minions Nightmare'

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Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

11-03-09 – 11-06-14

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EDIT: Major thanks to all those kind guys who recommended it for the collection ! First time that a movie of mine is in =3 (although I am kinda shocked about the low score however)

PLEASE RECOMMEND THIS FOR THE HALLOWEEN 09 COLLECTION!

SPRITES AHEAD! VOTE FAIR OR GTFO!

This short (not really scarry) episode in the life from Phil and Ike has been in development for three weeks,the actual animating process took me something over a week. I am actually really proud of what I've done in this short time. NGer's will love the ending...kinda rushed though.

Happy belated Halloween!

And I suggest turning up the volume a bit.

Reviews


BjorvyBjorvy

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Well...

You couldn't really have cock jokes in the collab since it counts as a bit of nudity, right?


MexifryMexifry

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Horrendous Scripting paired with Terrible Voices.

First thing is first, please check the volume on ALL of your audio tracks to check if they are loud enough. Most of the time all the voices were drowned out by the music, making them pretty much impossible to hear.

Anyways, to the bulk of my review.

First off, stolen graphics tweened haphazardly across the screen. The least you can do with sprites are to take some time and ease some of the tweens to make them look nicer, but that seemed to be a bit much work as well. Now you said to vote fairly because it was sprites, not that I normally decide to unfairly vote on any submission compared to another. Regardless, sprites are stolen artwork and that is that. There is no denying that. Unless you want to somehow prove that you drew every single one of the things presented on screen, then please PM me with your artwork and I'll see for myself if you actually drew it.

The voice acting just sounded like some kid with a mic saying shit, making the movie really bland. It was annoying to try and follow because the volume of the voices were so low compared to the music that when I even heard a voice well, it didn't hold my attention.

The timing of your jokes was really awkward and not that funny. In fact, most of the jokes weren't funny to begin with. All the humor was random cock jokes and homosexual humor executed poorly. I couldn't really find any memorable moments in this flash that would make me go, "i'd watch this again" or, "i'd show this to others." The punchline was really weak, which also made this flash forgetful.

The lip syncing was literally just a circle of a mouth getting bigger and smaller. I would like to say that the Lip Sync was tied well to the voices which was a positive point for this piece. Try actually using different types of mouths. For example, does your mouth in real life actually turn from a small circle to a big one? Do you show your tongue or teeth in the word/syllable you are speaking?

Suggestions?

Try and draw your characters in your flash. I'd rather see some bad art than see you give up and default to sprites.

Practice Practice Practice.
Work on scripting.
Work on voices.
Work on drawing.

If you keep practicing, you'll get better. :)

I hope this review is helpful for ya.


incuboyincuboy

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

has something

well its something with the sex jokes but its fine i laugh


FlashfireEXFlashfireEX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice!

I saw this a while ago but I decided to review it now. It was pretty good. You still need to get rid of those thin outlines but it's still good. The only thing I didn't really find funny is the cock jokes. I think you should try to lighten the amount of sex jokes you put in your movies but that's just my opinion. I'm sure most people on this site love them. Also, try to work on your lip syncing if you have time before you release your movies. Don't worry about Mexifry, I know him. He hates sprite movies so that's probably why he gave you such a low rating but he is a bit right about the ease. You should use a bit more of that.


BudjBudj

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I thought it was pretty good.

I am a bit iffy about the cock joke ending, but the random ranting in the forest was funny, especially when Ike told Phil to "SHUT THE FUCK UP"! Kinda makes me wish I commited more to making one. All in all good work.


Pkmn2Pkmn2

Rated 5 / 5 stars

lol. XD

Vergiss die anderen. =3
It's great. Very funny and totally laughed.
Without the subtitles would it be very hard to understand, but you saved it with the subtitles.
Normally I don't like cock jokes very much, but how you pulled it off was totally extreme. XD

It's very good either way. Keep it up! ;D


ProdigalProdigal

Rated 5 / 5 stars

FKING COCK JOKE

COCK JOAK


Box-KillaBox-Killa

Rated 5 / 5 stars

lol

The accent makes it so hilarious :D


hammerbroX9hammerbroX9

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wtf is with this stuff

Lol. was awesome as a short. and was as epic as a fox pumping grass

ps: Weeeeeeeeeee IAM AH GOUSTDDDDDDDD


DragproductionsDragproductions

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow.. Funny Shit Man

Very good!
Like the cock joke lmao!
But im kinda bumed that i wasn't in this episode...
haha, great good can't wasit for the nest one!


tank1319tank1319

Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice job

that was hilarious,cant wait for more of your videos


sumidiotdudesumidiotdude

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty clever.

I'm beginning to really like this series since I am starting to learn more about the characters and how they act. The music was catchy, and the ending was disturbing beyond belief. The voice acting was good, but some of the voices just were not appealing at all, like it seemed like it did not fit the personality of the character. The whole idea of DeDeDe being a homosexual really made me laugh, it was inevitable that someone would eventually come to that conclusion.

The flash was losing its flair by the middle of the episode, needless dialogue was all that was occuring and it really made me lose interest. On the plus side, the sprites looked great and I thought you put some funny jokes in there as well. Another decent episode for this series, I'm looking forward to seeing the future episodes. Keep up the good work!


AgumonkidAgumonkid

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Hilarious

especily the Hi guys wich was bowsers kingdom refrence


SamPDSamPD

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Well done.

You are improving with each episode.
Funny, Nintendo made products are suposed to be child friendly.
But the irony is that so many of their products have turned into a sex joke.
Miyamoto you clever basterd I PLAYED YOUR GAMES!


xAtomicBoyxxAtomicBoyx

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good work!

10/10

I am impressed with your flash animation, this flash animation was really really enjoyable.

I am liking the seriez more, the musicz were catchy and cool, every thing waz good and cool. Anywayz who'z the voice of Ike, Mila-Chan?

Did you rush on this animation? Cuz i saw alot of stuff you rushed on. Like the creditz. It waz just one unmoving creditz. I'm getting to know the characterz more, it'z a cool seriez.

Good musicz picks, it was very catchy and very good. Anywayz, good job on looking for brilliant and talented voice actorz, definitely five starz for you and your brilliant animation.

The comedy waz very funny, the funniest part waz the "cock joke and everything, it waz enjoyable. 10/10 + Favoritez.

Good start for a beginning, but here'z a question, "How did he meet the monster/ghost/or whatever? Cuz i don't get the point of thiz. Keep up the good work.

Have a good be late halloween!

Could you tell me what the next DeDeDe's minionz episode would be? Cuz i'm exicited knowing what your next episode of DeDeDe's minionz.

I enjoyed this flash animation alot, make a good sequel!

10/10


CubePandaCubePanda

Rated 5 / 5 stars

BAHAHAHAHAHA!

That was sooo funny! A little retarded but fucking funny!


tofuductionstofuductions

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Briliant!!!

Amazing! What a well done Flash, i hope to see more Dededs Minions Episodes


KirbSuperStardudeKirbSuperStardude

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Whoa!

I did not see that end coming.
It was pretty random, and I loved it!
Especially when Nightmare was dancing around with those...cocks.
5/5


RenaxusRenaxus

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

That was funny but...

The music was too loud and i could not hear the dialog.


tutorialkirbytutorialkirby

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Allen's very funny :D

MOAR MOAR MOAR :D

lol funny credit music


SkipperguySkipperguy

Rated 5 / 5 stars

WTF!

Weird.


Kyuubiscarz8Kyuubiscarz8

Rated 5 / 5 stars

lol

This was hilariously gay! Keep up the great work guys!


starkirby12starkirby12

Rated 5 / 5 stars

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!! THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!!!! IT WASN'T SCARY AT ALL SO PEOPLE AFRAID OF SCARY STUFF IT'S OK TO WATCH IT

...unless you don't like bad language

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