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Nov 2, 2009 | 12:42 PM EST

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Ok so this is my first ever in history MY flash submission, yes i know there are bits that could be betteer or edited but hey, i didn't read the manual for flash so yeah it was difficult

but all in all it's amazing to me, and hi to my buddys on Fb, yes it's me.

i dedicate this to the halloween holidays

ps there wil be a series of chibie comming soon, patience is a virtue

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startpanicingstartpanicing

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Excellent!

Good frame by frame. Rough around the edges, sure, but it's always nice to see honest effort.


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smirkstudiossmirkstudios

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

WOW

Very good use of frame by frame work, seems like you didn't use any tweens. I was no better than this when I started, and your motions are pretty nice. Work on smoothing them out on your next toon, and hopefully you keep working hard and having fun :D Great job, says I.


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NewRebornNewReborn

Rated 3 / 5 stars

nice first try

it's good for first try and it's actually funny :)
what's the name of the song?


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Porkdumplings responds:

animals by nickleback


BabiesAteMyDingoBabiesAteMyDingo

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

It's a good start.

Yes, I think for your first flash ever, you can hold you head up high.

But there are many points on which you could improve.

Foremost, loading. Why load a 3 minute audio clip for a 30 second animation? It increases the file size necessarily and therefore means the pre-loading takes that much longer, which in some cases raises the expectation of the submission.

In this case I'm afraid it did the opposite, it left me disappointed. I wanted to see more, if that makes sense.

It's a good visual style, if a little choppy.

And the lack of a story just meant I couldn't give this more than 5/10.

But you're halfway there, to making very successful flashes. I wish you all the luck you need, but I'm sure if you stick at this, you'll succeed.


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