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Ok so this is my first ever in history MY flash submission, yes i know there are bits that could be betteer or edited but hey, i didn't read the manual for flash so yeah it was difficult
but all in all it's amazing to me, and hi to my buddys on Fb, yes it's me.
i dedicate this to the halloween holidays
ps there wil be a series of chibie comming soon, patience is a virtue
Good frame by frame. Rough around the edges, sure, but it's always nice to see honest effort.
Very good use of frame by frame work, seems like you didn't use any tweens. I was no better than this when I started, and your motions are pretty nice. Work on smoothing them out on your next toon, and hopefully you keep working hard and having fun :D Great job, says I.
nice first try
it's good for first try and it's actually funny :)
what's the name of the song?
animals by nickleback
It's a good start.
Yes, I think for your first flash ever, you can hold you head up high.
But there are many points on which you could improve.
Foremost, loading. Why load a 3 minute audio clip for a 30 second animation? It increases the file size necessarily and therefore means the pre-loading takes that much longer, which in some cases raises the expectation of the submission.
In this case I'm afraid it did the opposite, it left me disappointed. I wanted to see more, if that makes sense.
It's a good visual style, if a little choppy.
And the lack of a story just meant I couldn't give this more than 5/10.
But you're halfway there, to making very successful flashes. I wish you all the luck you need, but I'm sure if you stick at this, you'll succeed.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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