People...
Are you so dense that you didn't bother to even look up Doom: Repercussions of Evil yourselves? Its one of the most notoriously bad fan fictions on the internet. He didn't write the story, he animated it. So when you say DURP DERP TEH SCRIEPT WAS BAAAAD, then yes, yes it is, but he didn't write said script, so don't pin him for the poor writing ability. You gotta love how ignorant the average person is. The flash itself though was decent, nothing really spectacular, nothing truly bad. Art needs some cleaining up, get some better quality audio, maybe add some kind of stupid over the top music to match the story.