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first flash project, first submission.
a bit messy, but i'm a beginner so i hope that's alright.
very simple animation.
and it's a true story.
some parts may be cut off.
Pretty good. And very awkward.
Decent for a first time
It was really funny, and it had a nice style of animation. I think that you could work on the movement of the bodies, because that just annoys me a little. Try to do more FRF instead of tweening :S
Pretty simple, but you could have something from that. I bet you could make some pretty sucessful series.
I think its cool ¡
The drawing style is nice,
it would be cool to add more color and backgrounds
next time make the dialogs bigger, because
some of the phrases were difficult to read
This is great. I liked the animation style and the story was funny! :D
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