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This was the first flash cartoon I ever made. It looks really dated, but I think there are still some laughs in there. Enjoy!
Edit: (Sorry about the sound quality! That's the best my 2001 setup could do!)
Voices were kinda low, but liked it!
As a first animation this one is real good. I did not have any trouble with the sounds. Knew what they were saying clearly as I hade my head phones on. Faved it.
First flash movie u've ever made? Doesn't look anything like it. I liked everything in this video except for one thing: The sound was very low. Just because of that, the movie became alot less enjoyable.
Hmmm coming out of retirment
This is a very well done flash... I haven't written a review in years, but I feel I must comment on this. Even though it may be "dated" in your eyes, the dubbing is wonderful, the humor, fresh, yet mild (nothing too over the top, like the last 5 seasons of the Simpsons...) I know it can belittle a creator to compare them with another's work, but this could compete with Homestar Runner's material. I really hope to see more. As for my rating, don't take a 9 as a form of criticism, I'm holding out my 10 for an opus piece, but honestly, the best new piece I have seen in years. Cheers.
Reexamine your audio balance.
Around the beginning particularly. Raised the volume until the backround music seemed at a sensible point but still had trouble hearing the dialogue.
A short film about a park bench
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