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Oct 25, 2009 | 12:54 AM EDT

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Sometimes the weirdest things happen at the oddest times.
-Refresh Lock

EDITED: This is my first trial run, and I didn't like it so now I'm currently working on my second.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 29, 2009


could make out Wha a betafiul day! OH shi.......


Rated 5 / 5 stars October 25, 2009

Good try, buuuut

Put the loader in a separate scene. Put more detail in the background, make sure you cut it off so we don't see it. The sidewalk is off perspective. Subtitles would be nice. Give more time between "Happy Bay Day" and "Oh Shit". Sound effects is a plus. Your "Bam" was one frame of an explosive.

Happy Ban Day!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars October 25, 2009

happy banday to you too

have a five, it's on me


Rated 5 / 5 stars October 25, 2009

Not bad

When Refresh say "oh shit", you should make him look at the car first.
Otherwise, it was funny!


Rated 5 / 5 stars October 25, 2009's a start.

your frame rate and lock movement are pretty, good, but i'd say add some subtitles, and maybe some sound effects. keep pluggin away. happy ban day!