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Submitted: 10/25/2009 | 12:54AM EST
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Genre: Comedy - Original
Current Score: 1.79 / 5.00
274 votes | 812 views
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Sometimes the weirdest things happen at the oddest times. -Refresh Lock
EDITED: This is my first trial run, and I didn't like it so now I'm currently working on my second.
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Average Score: 7.2 / 10
"its getting better"
but it is still crap
"Not bad for a trial run"
This was way too short even if it was a Lock flash short 3 seconds is pretty much a lack of effort and i didn't even get a good laugh from it,i'll give you the benefit of the doubt since this was a trial run for you but next time try to put some more effort in the flash.
"Nices"
could make out Wha a betafiul day! OH shi.......
"Good try, buuuut"
Put the loader in a separate scene. Put more detail in the background, make sure you cut it off so we don't see it. The sidewalk is off perspective. Subtitles would be nice. Give more time between "Happy Bay Day" and "Oh Shit". Sound effects is a plus. Your "Bam" was one frame of an explosive.
Happy Ban Day!
"happy banday to you too"
have a five, it's on me
