Score: 5

"It was mediocre"

by: Ericho

date: December 12, 2009

It is hard to judge something that is so short, and I could not understand what it was at all about. I'm thinking it may have been racist, because of the black guy being beat up and looking stupid. As always, I have to give you props on animation. I especially enjoy looking at the outlines of the characters, and how they contrast. The contrasting colors are pretty interesting to look at too. I suppose this was supposed to be used for a collab, or "Bytesize" or something, but it was hard to enjoy on its own.

Score: 10

"oh yeah!"

by: De-Line

date: October 25, 2009

i forgot all about bytesize portal or whatever that was called.

Score: 2

"I gave this a bad rating"

by: AccelaBoy

date: October 24, 2009

I didn't exactly find this entertaining.

Nice choice avoiding black lines and using unconventional colors. The hint of green landscape relates nicely to the character on the left, but the black dude on the right seems a little out of place. I'd suggest warming up the colors on him just a touch and taking out the highlights in his skin and some of his muscular details. He just looks too dimensional compared with everything else.

Really though, I'm only getting nitpicky on color and composition because there's nothing else to review. It's a guy slapping another guy. Who cares? Not me....and really that's saying a lot. The fact that it's 2:37 AM and I'm writing this long winded review says it all. Clearly I have nothing better to do with my time, and I have the patience and attention span to sit here and type and type and type. Yet still, I feel as though you stole 10 seconds of my life that I'll never get back. Way to go. I'm only writing this review for myself. I'm looking for some way to justify the time I'm wasting here. I'd feel better knowing my comments helped you in some way...What's that? They didn't? ...Well would you like a suggestion then? No? Oh...well...I was just going to say make it longer is all...

Yeah I don't make many flash animations because it's pretty tedious work. You probably spent like...almost 2 hours on this...You've got the right idea visually though. You should write a script or something...you know...just to jazz things up...That might be fun. I wrote a few scripts. One of them is about a security guard whose duty is to patrol an old abandoned building, but there's a pinball machine there and he gets to play pinball all night every night....I never did get around to fleshing that concept out. I think I'm going to try doing that. You've inspired me to do that.

Thank you for inspiring me.

Score: 7

"WTF."

by: Determinator44

date: October 24, 2009

It was short. Loop makes it annoying. Graphics are good, and I still seem to find it humorous each time, so those details save it. However, I see some potential for these two characters. You should start a pilot episode or something, get a series going. Or not. maybe just a one-time deal. But this isn't gonna get many stars from me.
Just cause the guy getting hit is black doesn't mean it's a hate crime. In fact, "hate crime" is really an issue brought up from closet-socialists hidden behind the political curtain, but I digress...

Score: 2

"Um..."

by: TruthWarren

date: October 24, 2009

OK, this is just a little bit ridiculous. I don't mean to sound rude but this flash just...well it kinda sucked. Sure the thing was well drawn so I gave you 2 stars for that, but the video is like 5 seconds long and it just keeps repeating. It gets a little annoying. And on top of that I didn't know whether to chuckle (the only thing closest to laughter this video could cause me to emit) or be pissed off. A while guy walks up to a black guy and smacks him for no reason. I don't know what to give you as far as constructive criticism apart from just not keeping this video around.