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Oct 23, 2009 | 9:30 PM EDT

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Here it is - my first Flash.

As someone who's frequented the site for EIGHT YEARS now, I figured it was time to submit something. I started taking Flash this semester as a senior, and this is my first animation. Hope you enjoy!



Rated 4 / 5 stars


To be a first flash, this was much better than most others. The animation was smooth, with no pixels or gaps. Next time, you should add some sound effects and music to improve it even more. Very nice.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


If this is your first flash then its epic
when i made my first flash it was so pixelated

whereismymthgrd responds:

I'm also a senior Graphic Design major at an art college. That helps. :)


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

good for first

idk much about flash but for your first time it looks good. keep working at it and show people here so you can get some constructive critisism to make you better. i would say for your next one add sound effects and make some small plot and maybe some facial expressions. also play with like zooming in and out for dramatic effect. looking forward to see what you do in the future



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


Seems you have some potential for decent artwork, but this was really very boring.
Not that I'd really expect that much more from a first flash, but it would definetely need at least some sort of plot, and at least some sound effects.

It's not bad at all for your first flash, bt I'd try to get some more practice before submitting anything to the site.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

A good start

This is a good start, now just add some more things to it and you have a great movie!

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