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«Bloody Bye» "Murders. Revenge. You won't believe how it ends!"
Type: Fun Short | Completed in: 2 days | Runtime: 30 seconds | Have a nice watching!
You're welcome. xD
cant say i saw that coming ^^ definitely liked it! then it really happened xD *claps*
Hah! I bet you didn't saw that coming, lol! Hehe, thanks a lot. xD I'm really glad that you liked it. ;]
Hehe, thanks. ;]
I found this to be pretty entertaining. First of all, your art style is very appealing. It's not minimalist, but it really puts the focus on the characters. Additionally, you have a masterful grip on coloration. Seriously, I couldn't suggest any changes to shades of skin, colors of shadows, etc.
Additionally, the voice acting was above-average. It wasn't the best I've ever heard. and I swear there was a little noise or some static, but it was absolutely what should be the standard. It reflects hard work. Also, the dialogue was kind of intense, but I knew this was comedy, so I was waiting for the joke, which I found funny, but not laugh out loud funny. Still it got a smile out of me.
The only problem was with the subtitles, which, for me, is a big concern. I'm sorry to say that there were some fairly basic errors, which I can't blame you for. I assume English is not your first language, and there are a lot of tools to help. Consider online translation tools, or ask users for help. A lot of users (myself included) would be more than happy to assist you.
Woah, thanks a lot for your review, you gave me some nice tips. ;]
I'm very hope for yours and others help next time, thanks. :)
well nice ketchup joke ^^ and whats that song at the end called ?
Mozart - Lacrimosa Dies Illa
Edwin Starr - War, What Is It Good For
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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