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This is another never ending loop.
#Comments/Rates/Tips & Tricks to improve are welcome!#
Even though it's just a few seconds loop there are lots of things that cannot pass unseen. The scene isn't focused only on the first layer: it is evolving even behind the coloured boxes and the balls that come out of the pipes. I think this really gives a good idea of a never-ending work (a factory, indeed) and the smoke in the lower part is a nice touch of style. It doesn't need lot of work: just come up with a story and keep the drawings and the animations as good as these and there will be no doubts about your art ^_^
Could possibly be a full movie
Well, it's not complete, but I think this has the basis to be a full length flash. The drawings are fairly decent, as is the flow in the animation. I also liked the song that you used for this.
I thought making loops would be good practices. I might end up like lots of people here with making full flash movies :) Thanks for your comment :)
but the movie you posted needs improvement :(
Ofcourse it does ;) Do you mind writing down what you think should be improved?
this tune is from bang boom splat
6 is manly because of the song
So I presume you didn't like the loop? May I ask what you didn't like?
Why is this funny? I think it's because I like the song. What is the name of the song?
Anyway, it's a simple loop, but its funny.
Sometimes the music gives an extra boost to a movie :P I know it's not a very hard loop but just keep in mind I'm not that advanced with flash yet :P I think/hope it will improve ^_^
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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