Well, for one it's not based on Gundams it's a series so there's going to be more. It's an animated series based off my novels. The designs were based off AC and Gundam as that's what helped me get better at drawing mecha.

Few things, the orbital weapons are actually called orbits which I was influenced from AC 2 and AC 2 AA. Ironically when I started watching Gundam they had funnels and such, so from there people would always assume I took the idea from Gundam when I didn't. I already have newer designs for each mech in the series but decided to stick with the gundam influenced ones while I'm working on getting a literary agent and the novels out there to be published.

Either way I'm fine with people constantly bringing up Gundam in a review. It's like everyone trying to do an action anime with fighting, people constantly bring up DBZ.

Though I do want to point out that this series did not start off in anime form, and the novels are much much better.

In regards to improving the graphics and design, well, I'm always improving from scene to scene as I keep getting more comfortable with Flash.

Still my art, line art and colored stuff is naturally 100x more detailed and refined than the animation. Since I do this for fun, I'm merely focusing on trying to show the story and entertain. If people are entertained than I'm happy. I don't care if my animation or art style isn't the best. All I ask is that people watch the full series or realize that these are broken up into scenes from a complete 20 minute episode.

Thanks for the review.

Thanks man, I appreciate the positive words, it means a lot. Yeah, it's a pain in the ass but I love it. Constantly improving, it's a lot of fun. This series is something close to me, started and still is a novel series of my own and spanned out into a comic and now this. The novels in my opinion are still the best because it was/is so easy to write it and describe everything as opposed to the animation and visual aspect. But yeah, haha.

Anyway, a score is a score, I just enjoy doing it. Some people enjoy it, some don't. Honestly, if one person enjoys it then that makes my day.

Thank you ^^. I appreciate the kind words. Yeah, I'm fixing the audio balance. I probably should have held off a day, but I was kinda anxious to get this scene out since there's still 4 more scenes of this episode to do..>_>.

Actually a lot of that wasn't in the script, it was just added when some people weren't sure what was going on, it's more a way to cover up the lack of skill in animating, especially when I animated things a bit too fast or unclear.

I'm a better writer than an animator and I'm used to writing in novel format where the descriptions and such show the scene. I definitely have a way to go in animating where I will be able to feel more confident in visually explaining things. Til then, oh well.

Thanks, I appreciate it. My animation is constantly improving, and this is the current example of my animating, it;s definitely the best of what I've done so far.

The speech will be corrected tonight. Honestly, I was getting too frustrated with the computer issues I had....haha. Oh well.