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First Flash so please don't be TO harsh, now random faces.
:( :) :0 :P :& :D B)

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Ugh!

I'm sorry but theres an extent to how much being a noob protects you, the project is obviously rushed and you were quite frankly lazy in the wrong places. You had an idea, and you blew it, and even if you pulled it off i don't think the joke itself was pretty funny. The looping makes the already annoying music expand into a horrific cacophony that ironically made my think MY system had an error. You must be a bit more into it later. Next time, wait, handle your animation better.

In any case, i don't think the art was too bad.

aaa...

could have been better...

Its ok

i have to give it a 3 but for ur first flash it seem petty good just keep working at it next time try so voice

TotalTim responds:

thank you, I'll try that.

Alrighty then...

The flash was primitive and the concept was kinda dumb, the music was a tad annoying and it kept looping over itself.

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3,641
Votes
6
Score
3.69 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 16, 2009
7:41 PM EDT