Pampcakes
- Score:
- rated 3.79 / 5 stars
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- 23,419 Views
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- funny
- pancakes
- toast
- breakfast
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Author Comments
EDIT: Thanks so much for the frontpage! I've fixed a few things I found wrong with the file, mainly the preloader. Also, if I'd known this was getting frontpaged, I would have made a better icon for it, but I s'pose it's to late to change that now, as I couldn't find the option for it.
Here is a short I made last year that I wanted to finish, but then decided to tack on a dumb ending instead. You may or may not get some enjoyment out of it.
Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 17, 2009
Haha... quite so
Simple comedy and morbid death of talking pancakes :) made me smile and as a British egg, I thank you sir
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 19, 2009
Not perfect, but good enough.
The animation and voice acting were a little annoying at first. This was then followed up by the burnt toast talking. THEN the comedy struck and it was all worth whatching.Not to mention the absolute "lol" ending.I guess try to put more effort into NOT making it boring at first, y'know really grab the viewer! Once that has happened you'll get 10 stars and more good ratings.
I feel the mundane-ness of the beginning creates a better build up to the finale. And also, the cartoon is only 1.5 minutes long, you must get bored pretty easy. Thanks for the advice though.
Rated 3 / 5 stars October 18, 2009
this is newgrounds
put in some cussing and blood
I'm sorry, that'll be my top priority next time.
Rated 3 / 5 stars October 16, 2009
weak punchline
was interesting at first, but declined rather than rose. the end was disappointing
I agree, the punchline is pretty much non-existent. Thing is, I pictured a talking stack of pancakes in my head being eaten, and then started animating it. Then I had no idea where to take it and this is the result. Thanks for the review, any criticism helps.
Rated 3 / 5 stars October 16, 2009
Frontpage!! YEY!
Nicely done mate. Keep up the good work.
Congrats, you got frontpaged!
You need to work a little on your voice acting tough If you keep practicing, you will reach great animation levels. You got talent.
Keep walking.
Thank you for your kind words sir! I am so happy I made it to the frontpage! I will practice voice acting too, my accents are pretty horrendous.