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Oct 15, 2009 | 7:06 PM EDT

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EDIT: Thanks so much for the frontpage! I've fixed a few things I found wrong with the file, mainly the preloader. Also, if I'd known this was getting frontpaged, I would have made a better icon for it, but I s'pose it's to late to change that now, as I couldn't find the option for it.

Here is a short I made last year that I wanted to finish, but then decided to tack on a dumb ending instead. You may or may not get some enjoyment out of it.

Reviews


dghdhgdgh3dghdhgdgh3

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 19, 2009

Not perfect, but good enough.

The animation and voice acting were a little annoying at first. This was then followed up by the burnt toast talking. THEN the comedy struck and it was all worth whatching.Not to mention the absolute "lol" ending.I guess try to put more effort into NOT making it boring at first, y'know really grab the viewer! Once that has happened you'll get 10 stars and more good ratings.


PeteGrammarman responds:

I feel the mundane-ness of the beginning creates a better build up to the finale. And also, the cartoon is only 1.5 minutes long, you must get bored pretty easy. Thanks for the advice though.


Cloudkiller91Cloudkiller91

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 19, 2009

Awesome...

Well done man, it was funny, well drawn and all together awesome.
Now all we need is for something like this to really happen on shows like Sesame Street.


PeteGrammarman responds:

But I like Sesame Street! Well, except for Elmo, let's throw Elmo in the fire.


zestyzanderzestyzander

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 19, 2009

hahaha

loved it
Pain starts with P


PeteGrammarman responds:

Oh my god, it does! It all comes together now! Thanks for the review, pal.


skeetskeetdinosaurskeetskeetdinosaur

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 19, 2009

Good Flash.

GREAT voice acting (hence the 8 stars)
Good animation
Good Storyline

Overall good work, thanks for the flash.


PeteGrammarman responds:

No sir, thank you for the review!


stormblazstormblaz

Rated 5 / 5 stars October 18, 2009

just bicause its pancakes

pancakes rulezzzzz


PeteGrammarman responds:

Makes sense to me!