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Oct 15, 2009 | 7:06 PM EDT

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EDIT: Thanks so much for the frontpage! I've fixed a few things I found wrong with the file, mainly the preloader. Also, if I'd known this was getting frontpaged, I would have made a better icon for it, but I s'pose it's to late to change that now, as I couldn't find the option for it.

Here is a short I made last year that I wanted to finish, but then decided to tack on a dumb ending instead. You may or may not get some enjoyment out of it.

Reviews


suki-satakesuki-satake

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 17, 2009

Me?!

I've never done this xD. Poor panpcakes =/.

But what the point of the egg? He looked like the old man in monopolie's games board.

Goog jod.


PeteGrammarman responds:

You've never eaten pancakes? The egg is a typical British monocle, tophat wearing fellow, like I assume all people from Britain are. Thanks for the review!


ZenJinZenJin

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 17, 2009

lol!

It went exactly where I thought it was going to go, but I'm glad it did. Sometimes predictability is a good thing I guess.


PeteGrammarman responds:

Thanks! Yes, it was predictable, but pancakes are meant to be eaten, sentient or not.


Xin02Xin02

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 17, 2009

Still needs work.

The sound was not very good, it was really hard to hear the pancake talk. It was not as funny as it potentially could have been, i was hoping for a good twist, but nothing really hit home.

The animation was kind of poor. For such a short flash, I think it could have been made a little more fluid.

The concept was cool but it just could have been a lot more provided you put the effort into it.


PeteGrammarman responds:

I haven't heard any complaints about the sound, but I know its quality is not the greatest. I do agree that the concept has potential that is never reached, and with a little more work, it could have been much better. That's my feeling towards this cartoon as well, but it seems to do well as a short.

Although the animation is stiff and limited, I think it suffices for the length of the short.

Thanks for the criticism though, most people don't really give good advice, but I will gladly take all of your words into consideration for my next project.


FishesFishes

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 17, 2009

Lol

I really really thought at first it was going to try to sell me car insurance. Seriously XD.

Anyway, cool flash, interesting to say the least, and gotta just love breakfast based inspired flashes no?


PeteGrammarman responds:

This review seems to be most accurate, and everyone loves breakfast. Thanks for your words, sir!


peteron85peteron85

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 16, 2009

sorry

didnt like it at all. if anything it was a waste of time. Im giving 4 stars because the artwork was good. You have potential, i just dont like this one.


PeteGrammarman responds:

No need to apologize, I could see how some people would consider this a waste of time, no real joke to be told in this Flash. Thanks for the artwork compliment and review though!