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This is my first flash so rate fair.
Enjoy! (It´s pretty mad!)
well a good first try
i think people have mentioned this but ur flash really really needs a story, a background, a plot,and some main characters. i was pretty confused thru out the whole flash, and yes the animation was def. sub par, but thats to b expected on the first attempt. great start, and i can't wait to see ur work improve. keep trying :)
You are making my hopes up, thanks
Pretty cool... dor some reason reminds me of fallout 3 ... awesome first attempt... lets hope that you can keep up the effort............................on a side note, you should try to improve on youre graphics... if it takes time do it.... poor visuals is usually the reason as to why something gets blammed in the first few minutes , even if it has a good story.... if it takes a while to look good well you can do it :D
Thank you for helping me.
pretty good, but
10 is pretty high review. respect!
a piece of
horrible it doesnt even desvere to light
That´s your opinion but pls watch your language. =)
personally i don't care if it is anybody's first flash.
This is entertaining though because of the story behind it. sure the animation isn't the best. sometimes sub par animation though brings more character than the over the top stuff. Great work on your flash, maybe we'll see more to come, and with more practice you'll do great
Thanks for believing me =)
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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