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The white box short

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Ok...thats my first attempt to submit a movie on newgrounds, so please have mercy ;)
This idea came to me accidently, when my internet stopped and I was bored to death...you know what I mean.Please leave a review
Music is:
Kenkraft 400 - Zombie Nation

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you had something goin

shame you didn't keep goin. it looked like you were going to get into a "animator vs. animation" type deal which is always interesting because you can get really creative with how your figures interact with the environment. not too bad for a first submission. at least i could tell this had some thought and effort put into it unlike some others i've seen.

tips:

-instead of using a song, sound effects would've been much better since you animated explosions.

-text color should've been darker. blue and green are close in value so it was a little hard to read

-use easing for your tweens. it would help create a sense of gravity when objects drop like when your character was dropping his weapons.

christolilov responds:

Thanks for your review, I appreciate it.
Truth is I didnt make it longer and with sound effects because I got lazy...
Just wanted to know if someone likes the idea and my animation style.
Since its obviously still here and even got a relatively good score for a 50 second crappy flash Ill make a second version of it.Longer and with effects...

Only 2questions

Why did he decided to get out only now if he is there all his life? :D

and second question why this movie was so short?

cute!

I thought it was bit similar to animator Vs animation but still, pretty funny.
awfully short though.

Credits & Info

Views
3,245
Votes
3
Score
2.67 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 15, 2009
12:18 PM EDT
Genre
Experimental