Score: 7

"Not too original"

by: Haggard

date: November 22, 2009

Not too original, but very well executed. The lines are in synch most of the time with the music, which creates a very nice effect.
The colour changes could have been synched a bit better, though. At least it seemed to me that the changes came a bit random. But maybe I just missed the pattern behind it.

Too bad the flash is so short. Even though this is FBF and those flashes are generally shorter than non-FBF flashes this is short even for a FBF flash (if that makes any sense... ^^).
It would be nice if you added a second, similar song to the flash to make it a bit longer.

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Score: 7

"Interesting"

by: Kirbyfemur

date: November 21, 2009

It fits nicely with the song in that you've chosen, but there could be more. (As i know people have said.)

The movement moves well, but it looks like it's ever so slightly of beat, bit luckily it doesn't continuously become off beat, but it's consistently on beat but not. ( I hope this makes sense)

But what you could do, instead of just a lot of circling and ups and downs. Make it rise and fall with the intensity of the song. Also make sure the color changing isn't just at random times either, though i think it only really did that a couple times.

Anyways, it wasn't to bad. =3

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Score: 7

"Great frame-by-frame, but too simple"

by: ThePortalGuru

date: November 18, 2009

I loved the frame-by-frame animation you put into this piece. The music and the squiggle felt perfectly synced, and I loved the flow that was projected from it. The colorfulness and simplicity was great and charming, but I also felt that the weak point lied within it.

The flash was a little too simple. Just a line moving around a screen to a beat is a pretty unexciting thing to watch. Try adding more elements to it next time. Maybe strobe lights in the background, or some other objects growing and moving to the beat of the song. Spice things up a bit.

Overall though, a pretty solid unsung gem, and I hope to see future efforts.

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Score: 9

"No improving here"

by: SCTE3

date: November 17, 2009

I can't really see any kind of improvements needed on this, it kept brilliant the whole time and the faster it was the faster the lines were. That's what I think it was all about anyways, very nice it was indeed. Can't think of much to say here aside from good luck in future flash projects.

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Score: 6

"A little short, but not bad."

by: Coop83

date: November 17, 2009

I think that there are some positives to take away from this piece - the pace is good, almost perfectly synced with the piano, though with the speed that SessileNomad encouraged in some of the parts, you'd be hard pushed to recognise if you were out of time there, I feel.

I'm not too pleased with how short the piece itself is - you'd be much more capable of making a flash that had a duration of closer to 2 minutes. The animation style requires a little more finesse and presentation, because it's just squiggles. I'm not wanting to sound harsh, but that's all you've got there at present. Taking it forward would have some of these squiggles coming together and dancing, forming images that move about the page and give the viewer something amazing to behold.

This next step could be crucial to the development of future projects of yours and I'm confident that you can take this further, with some of SessileNomad's more adventurous pieces, or, dare I say it, your own.

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