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Watch the immortal stickman pass trough the maze. This is one of my good animations.
Haha this is my animation and this is my old account XD XD XD !!!
I liked it, the jokes and feel of it was pretty solid. the animation for the stick guy could be better though, not like "o make him a full body person" i understand he is a stick figure on purpose, but a little more cleanly drawn like the other things in the animation, also, sound effects would be really great and massively increase my opinion.
I hate you! Now I'm going to see nightmares about being that stickman.
Pretty good actually.
This is a pretty good animation with some pretty good humor. It isn't LOL humor, just a chuckle.
It just needs some improvements until it can be great.
Smoother animation - The animation seemed verrrrryy jittery and the stickman looked rushed. Try using the pencil to draw the stickmen (Using the smooth setting). It may take longer but it's worth it if done correcy. Do more frames too, not making it longer but making the animation more smooth.
Better environment graphics - Take more time when drawing the blood and have more fun with the environment. Do things like walls cracking a falling to pieces. Again this may take more time but is worth it in the end.
More characters - Add more characters, make it into a race type thing. The problem is that this is too much of a sequence and there is little to it. If you have multiple characters trying to make it to the end then this gives the user more to focus on and gives the impression that there is more to the animation (Why not do a survival type thing?).
Sound effects - I don't really need ot say anything.
Best of luck and I hope my comment comes to some use.
A short film about a park bench
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