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Oct 13, 2009 | 8:48 PM EDT

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Author Comments

My first animation ever. Enjoy !

Reviews


tpghksdl10tpghksdl10

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very very nice

amazing for a first time please make more



LukeMahoneyLukeMahoney

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not bad for a first submission!

Definately keep going with your animation! Try to add shadows to your backgrounds/characters or anything else you want to add emphasis too. Other than that good work!



UchuaUchua

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Not Bad

It's an obvious first, not that i've submited anything myself, i don't have the time or patientice, but to stay on topic i enjoy the humor but it lacked the reason why he didn't just run as the laser slowly appears out of the ground... Still very good first so i'll give it a 5



potatoboy37potatoboy37

Rated 4 / 5 stars

dont listen to the ppl below me

they're just jealous cause thier firsts werent as good as yours. however that doesnt mean yours doesn't need work.....try using other textures other than solid color, for example the laser should have been opaque or even near transparant. use dynamic zoom to emphasize certain events, and try not to use cut scenes unless absolutely necessary, animation should be free flowing, not cut cut up into bits and pieces, also remember that light and shadows often dont have outlines, unless coming from an outside source such as a window



AngryswedeAngryswede

Rated 3 / 5 stars

pretty good

nice ending that was a little dry but i like dry.