Hmmm

Would love to give you positive or contructive critism but I suppose all I can say is come up with something that is atleast funny and maybe ur videos will do better in the future.

Hm...

Only criticism I can give is the shortness and death. It shood look more realistic. Easier way. Take away the blood. Make him stand on his tail straight with his eyes as Xs and just let him topple :D Apart from that, nice try!