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my first flash....please give any commentary on what to change or what you think
Its Ok ! But TO Fast !
So Only 4 Stars , Sorry
great start get it a lil slower.
yea i tried to make it slower but i just couldnt for some reason
eh ive seen better
its ok. not like the real ones. to fast
Not too bad for your first flash
It was way too short and the awesome face was just you trying to be funny when it really made little sense. For a madness video there was a lack of gore. But please don't be discouraged, this was great for a first flash and I didn't mean to offend you I'm just telling you what you need to improve. Just try to improve your work a bit more and make it a bit longer. Good luck.
yea thx ill maybe improve for the next flash and add more gore and the awesome face i didnt put it ther becuse i was trying to be funny i thought it would fit prefectly
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